Thesis: I have been working this job for two plus years, and as my time here I have noticed a few derogatory things. 


Subtopic 1 topic sentence: I do not know if many have been in a situation where they feel looked down on, judged, or belittled.

Subtopic 2 topic sentence: There are something’s I have not been prepared for myself while I have been apart of this cleaning service

Subtopic 3 topic sentence: 

Thesis Statement:



As a football player, my mind was reformed when my coach, Coach Green, said this one quote to the team that I knew would change my way of thinking as a person.